In a meeting with our teachers , they picked up on a few areas of possible improvement:
- More cross cutting between Louis' skate scene and Vivian's' conversation to make the two main characters more obvious
- Ensure continuity
- Arrows necessary to show movement within the shots
- More focus on the skateboard to maintain the urban teenage theme
-Too many distributor titles- unrealistic and overpowering
-Include more titles throughout in order to make the opening seem more realistic and similar to the typical film opening
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